This is my Week 4 Assignment of ENG 103
4-1: Week 4 Analysis
Purpose
To assess your ability to:- Students will use the knowledge from this week's readings to complete this assignment.
Action Items
- Read this week's assigned readings.
- Locate a piece of technical communication and evaluate its ethical stance.
- Is the information presented in such a way that ideas or facts are exaggerated or suppressed?
- Are any cultural issues exploited?
- What modifications would you make to the document?
Submission Instructions
Complete this assignment and submit per your professor's instructions.Grading Criteria
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week 4 assignment
(picture of a product )
This advertisement is unethical because
of these points :
·
They use a visual
image that conceal the truth, we can say that they use Photoshop programs to
show the effect of the cream. this kind of images affect people and attract
them to buy the product.
·
They exaggerate about the product's effectiveness by using these phrases "fairness in 1 minute"
" unbelievable " " just 5 crore / means like 5 $" , and this is kind of fabricating the truth.
·
They also downplaying information, because there are not enough
information of an exact medical study that shows if this product is really
effective.
·
This company fails to
inform the public about a safety hazard in its products.
There are no cultural issues
exploited.
Some modifications I would make :
·
Using a real picture before and after using the product
without editing this picture in a computer program which changes the real
affect.
·
Changing these expressions " fairness in 1 minute
" " unbelievable" to expressions that shows the exact time it
takes.
·
Never use words like " unbelievable" because these
words are always exaggerates the truth.
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